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Poem: This is my Body

Updated: Mar 29, 2019



This is my body

an orchard of pomegranates

eyes like doves

lips like a crimson threat

breasts like two fawns

that feed among the lilies

rounded thighs like jewels

hands dripping with myrrh

stately as a palm tree

comely as Jerusalem

This is my body, shared, with you.


This is my body

bone of your bone

flesh of your flesh

sanctifying the marriage bed

bearing the fruit

breasts rounded with babies

stretch marks tracing

the pangs of childbirth

wrinkles trading

the streams of tears

This is my body, wedded to you.


This is my body

sacrilege--sacrifice

punched, kicked, slapped, bruised

stalked and pillaged

split lip, broken bones,

battered heart

eyes like shadows

of a civil war

where love is strong as death

and passion fierce as the grace

This is my body, broken by you.


How will you remember me?


From Broken by You: Men's Role in Stopping Woman Abuse, by Morten Paterson, The United Church Publishing House, 1995.


Synopsis:

The poem illustrates a narrative of a woman’s story who suffered from domestic abuse. The women divided her life into three parts, she started her story picturing herself as a girl, Joyful, beautiful and shining. Then as a married woman, happy, sexy and hopeful. Finally, as a broken woman, sad, humiliated and betrayed after her husband broke the sacred bond of marriage that should be built on love, respect and mercy when he turned to be abusive, when he started punching, kicking and slapping her, she describes how bruised and broken she felt. She reprehends to her husband the split lips, broken bones, battered heart and finally she leaves him the question on how he wants to remember her.


Rationale:

I am usually not a fan of poetry, but this poem by Morten Paterson from his book Broken by You: Men's Role in Stopping Woman Abuse (1995), caught my attention because I admired and liked the simple words the poet used to describe the life and emotions of an abused woman, he gives the reader the exact feeling of women in a violent relationship. Hoping that when he reveals and describes how this humane being feels in different stages of their lives, from being happy, shining and hopeful human beings to broken, humiliated and scared after going through a violent abusive relationship; might encourage men to stop violence and abuse against women.


Keywords: Gender, sexual violence, transnational feminism, women

Author: Blackiris

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